Musings (one)

[dwim]

Woke up
sat down
smoked a cigarette
It's silent around here
except for the outside boomboxes
of this city
Is there anything left
after this last breath?

Seems as if this life
can be only a dream.
I'll be happy if
that's all it is.

[Chilimuffin]

"Our life is no dream, but it should, and will perhaps become one."
-Novalis

I like this a lot.... you have a good grasp of gritty city imagery - something about you and cigarettes , and the lines of cityscapes... it works well for you.


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"carpe jugulum" - terry pratchett

"but truth is just like time, it catches up and it just keeps going."
-dar williams

"I will always be me; I will always be new."
-delmore schwartz

[AsIs]

I like it too dwim.

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- "How do you know the chosen ones? No greater love hath a man than he lay down his life for his friend. Not for millions, not for glory, not for fame... for one person. In the dark. Where no one will ever know or see." - Sebastion, Babylon 5
- INDECISION is the key to FLEXIBILITY.

[neomel]

... and now , time for the irregulary scheduled comedic relief by the mel ...

ahem ...

im doing a little artistic exercise today so im staying in this closet until i can come up with a decent idea for the story im writing ...

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so far its a toss-up between a story about a guy who has to go to the bathroom real bad , or one about a guy whos really hungry

*** hears crickets chirping ***

thank you , youve been too kind ...

the mel

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i dont suffer from insanity i enjoy every minute of it

do not fear your enemies . the worst they can do is kill you . do not fear friends . at worst they may betray you . fear those who do not care ; they neither kill nor betray but betrayal and murder exist because of thier silent consent .